December 15, 2006...5:00 am

How many books did you write?

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Science fiction author Tobias S. Buckell is running a survey on his blog asking published novelists to say how many books they wrote before selling their first novel, and if their first written novel was the one they sold. If you’re an author, please take a minute (it just takes a minute) to fill out the survey. I think (thanks to Justine, who tipped me off about the survey) that it would be great to hear from as many genres as possible. So if you want to spread the word on your own blog… I know we get a lot of romance writers here.

(Buckell actually did an excellent, Brenda Hiatt “Show me the money!” type survey for science fiction authors about what kind of advances SFF houses were paying and whether or not an agent was worth the money. It’s here. Great stuff.)

For the record, I wrote four complete novels, a novella, and a couple of false starts/proposals before I sold my first book. The first book I sold was incomplete at the time of sale, but ended up being my fifth book. I’ve now written six books.

I’m really looking forward to seeing the results of this survey, because, unlike some of the respondents on Buckell’s blog, I think that most writers did not sell the first book they wrote (or at the very least, did not sell it first).

Some writers I know feel paralyzed by a need for their first book to be perfect, such that they never end up writing it in the first place. I understand this desire. You think “I am working so hard on our my book. If I think that it won’t make it, why would I bother working on it?” It’s almost necessary to believe it will sell, otherwise it’s difficult to commit yourself to it. That’s why programs like NaNoWriMo can work — they take some of the pressure of writing saleable work off you for a little bit.

(I only figured out shortly before finishing my first book that it wasn’t “the one” — but not even strongly enough to NOT ask for a published author friend’s advice, not strongly enough to NOT edit it or NOT send out a query. But by the time it was rejected, 9 months later, the scales had been lifted from my eyes.)

I’ve spoken before about what I think a first book is. It’s like a first pancake. But at the same time, I understand the need to believe otherwise — as long as you don’t let it ruin your writing. Do not let the need to sell keep you from the story. Protect the work. (This is my new mantra, by the way. I’m thinking of a tattoo: Opus Contege.) The work is more important than the industry, than the reviews, than the trolls, than the contest judges. Opus contege.

And some people do sell their first books, either right away or years later. Which is great for them. Fabulous! I’m very happy. But I don’t think it’s common. (And I don’t think it matters, because publishers slap “first novel” on a person’s first published novel, no matter what else they’ve got under their bed. Which isn’t, by the way, “misleading,” because the point is to signal to the customer if there’s anything else you can buy by the person, which there isn’t.) But I’m interested to see if I’m right.

And I’m interested to see how many people care. I know if I say that it doesn’t mean anything if you sell your first, someone who hasn’t visited Fezziwig’s Xmas party for a while will say it’s because I didn’t sell my first. (Seriously, have a truffle. Or some peppermint bark. Eggnog?) But I’ve never spent any time thinking about it. I know some people who’ve sold their first, some who haven’t, some who did and wished they hadn’t, some who did years later, and I never thought it had any bearing on talent. Did anyone else read that article in Wired discussing “experimentalists” vs. “conceptualists?” Interesting, what? Of course, I don’t know how much you can relate it to selling the first book you write, since sometimes that doesn’t have as much to do with quality as whether or not your editor is married/pregnant/offered a job in Sri Lanka.

Honestly, I think I’m more in awe of people who didn’t sell their first, or their sixth, or their twenty-fifth (unless we’re talking about the people who sold their first novel after years and years of rejection). Because those people stuck to it. They weren’t swayed by rejection letters or fickle markets, or editors leaving or lines shutting down or idiots telling them they sucked. They believed in themselves, and their work, and in getting better, and in getting out there. Persistence in this business is so hot.

I know I’m usually the first on the “writing statistics suck” bandwagon, because I do think it means people focus on the wrong things. Like thinking that if an agent gets 20,800 queries and requests 54 manuscripts, that you have a 1:385 chance of getting a request, when in actuality, most of these people have a pretty terrible chance, and a tiny percentage have a reallly good chance. But this survey of Bucknell’s doesn’t fall under the statistics umbrella so much as the myth busting umbrella. In this case, it’s the myth of the overnight sensation, the person who scribbles the book idea on the back of a napkin and is offered a million bucks. So statistics on real world first advances and real world writing career trajectories are actually helpful for the writer, so they can make realistic assessments that will actually help them with career planning. All hearing the stats on manuscripts submitted to manuscripts requested to manuscripts represented to manuscripts bought does is make them stress about their submission.

So, go respond to the survey. I’m eagerly awaiting the results. Meanwhile, back to the peppermint bark.

15 Comments

  • Oh man, as if I’m not nervous enough yet!

    I suppose I should put my nervousness to good use, like frantically studying for finals.

    Hm.

    Maybe not.

  • I think Tobias’ survey is hugely helpful, if only because I’m on my sixth novel and still not good enough to be sending out stuff to publishers (there are hardly any agents in Holland, we still send work to publishers directly. Mostly. I think). And I’m still having trouble with that nasty little unhelpful voice that says ‘if you’re not good enough now, you should just quit quit quit, because you’re delusional, that’s why’. And knowing that other people, writers I admire, have had to write several practice novels too is very encouraging.

  • Oh, and a small correction: Tobias’ last name is Buckell, not Bucknell (signed the lady who always has to spell her last name and is thus perhaps a little overzealous in this department)

  • I love your tattoo idea. It would be a great reminder if it were placed on your wrist, so you could view it while typing. And of course you could cover it up with a watch or a bracelet if needed. ;)

    Signed,

    Inked

  • You could also go the sticky post-it near your computer route. It would be less painful.

  • Diana Peterfreund

    Jaida, study for finals. Statistics don’t mean squat. Besides, you’re already so far ahead of the curve in all areas (pre pub fan base, youth, sarcasm capabitlities…)
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    Marrije, thanks for the catch! Oops, I think I got it mixed up with the university. Seriously,d ont even worry about the numbers. My very good friend just sold her first, and it was her eleventh novel written. And she sold it in a great four book deal. And even AFTER you sell your first, it doesn’t mean that every book after that will sell, either. Don’t quit!
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    You’re right, Heather. Post-its are easier. Also, jewelry. I like jewelry.

  • The work is more important than the industry, than the reviews, than the trolls, than the contest judges. Opus contege.

    Yes, yes! Jewelry! This is my new mantra, too. Has been since July.

    I also believe in the first book as a pancake theory. Yes, I know there are exceptions, but there are actually great lessons to be learned if your first book sucks. I sold my fourth book…and recently sold the idea of my third, though I’ll have to write it all over again. After 25+ books, your style sort of changes. :-)

  • Jessica Burkhart

    Whew, if the first book is like a pancake that certainly takes off the pressure to write a *perfect* first novel. I can’t wait to see the survey results! Great post, Diana. :)

  • In addition to advance numbers, I would love to see a survey that includes average print runs for different formats (mm, trade, HB, etc – Diana, stuff I’ve bugged Diana about offline), as well as sell through numbers. Something anonymous that would help new authors get an idea of what the numbers mean and how they compare.

    And as for the first book – I compare it to your first real serious relationship. I’m going to go out on a limb and risk a cybersmack, but I don’t know many people who marry their first loves. My husband and I refer to that as the “use it up” relationship – it’s the relationship you use up while learning to be an adult in an adult relationship. You keep going back and trying to fix it, but in the end, it’s pretty well trashed.

    The first book is the same – you go back, you tweak, but in the end, it’s just not there and never will be. But that’s not to say you shouldn’t try to make that first book (or any book) the very best it can be. It just means that at some point, you may have to face the reality that this one is never going to take off.

    But just as some people marry their high school sweethearts and live happily ever after, some people sell their very first books, and that is fantastic, but less common.

  • Oh, and I’m one of those publishing statistics lovers that so annoys Diana. I can’t help it. Putting a percentage to some things makes me feel better, even if that number is ultimately meaningless.

  • Diana Peterfreund

    Jessica, did you get my message yesterday? I didn’t know if blogger was letting me post.

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    Jami, picture me with my finger on the side of my nose. “Not me!” It wouldn’t be interesting I think, if only to get a handle on the bell curve of it all. Now, who wants to run it?

  • Diana Peterfreund

    Ack! And by “wouldn’t” I clearly meant the exact opposite. It WOULD be interesting…

    Sheesh, Di. Proofread.

  • I would think that some of this has to do with personality type rather than any form of talent.

    Some people love the thought of editing the same book because they are so enamoured with the first idea for a novel.

    Some people think polishing a piece of crap doesn’t change the fact that it is crap and move on quickly.

    In some sense, I think the writer who sells the 5th or 8th novel is in a better position. A. they have trunk stories that COULD be re-written. Or maybe even are sellable but just didn’t grab enough attention or find the right home at first.

    Think of ‘The Historian’. 2 book deal for over 1 Million smackers. took her 10 years to write it. I’m betting she never fulfills the second half of that contract. Think of the pressure. And the writing process that she has established. 10 years. Lots of drafts.

    Now compare that to the Stephen King/James Patterson level of output…

    I have a friend who wrote three novels, then went back to the first and took another pass and that is what landed him a top quality agent. So, technically, he’s probably going to sell his first novel written, but really, I’d count it as the fourth.

    You know, there’s absolutely nothing wrong with writing words that don’t sell. Some people call it practice. Software developers write code that doesn’t end up in the final product. Companies build prototypes. Nothing wrong with writing a novel that doesn’t sell. In fact, it should be expected.

  • I think you know I sold my first book after about 3.5 years of writing. It’s not something I’ve ever dwelled on. It took me a year to write it, a year to rewrite it while learning the craft and then to basically have it shopped and rejected and revised and rejected. If I never had an interested agent, I certainly would have moved on, because the second book was so hard for me to write! And now that my first sale won’t even be pubbed, maybe it wasn’t meant to be. But the first sale helped with the second and for that I am grateful. My third book is coming much easier and my style has seriously changed. =)

  • I have a friend who sold her first book . . . but she took 6 years to write it (and rewrite it and re-rewrite it.)
    So it was like writing 6 books. At least.
    Susan
    sshay.wordpress.com


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